# Independent design review — #398

**PASS after addressed R1.** This reviews the local Astra High design artifact and its targeted implementation handoff, not running GoBadminton source, DEV acceptance or Owner UAT. No model/provider calls or source changes were made by the reviewer.

Independently ran Chromium 1243 with sandbox enabled: 19 states at 390/1280 (38 cases), six grouped state/interaction checks, and eight actual 200% text cases. No JavaScript errors or external requests. Reviewed actual loading screenshots at both widths and mobile UNKNOWN. The ordinary catalogue keeps its normal-text vertical position across all 19 states; enlarged text can grow naturally. Buttons remain reachable, inside the viewport and at least 44px. Static skeletons do not invent nearby profiles/counts or animated scans.

The initial enlarged-text check found **R1**: mobile Retry/Reconcile extended left of the viewport despite a clean scrollWidth. Natural CSS wrapping and a growing action row repaired this without shrinking text or loosening thresholds. The stronger left/right-edge rerun passes all eight cases; the original failing evidence remains private. Operator results (38 geometry + 8 flows) are separate corroboration, not substituted for this review.

Consent remains in the existing owner before OS permission and POST; OS permission does not imply visibility. ON is confirmed only. UNKNOWN offers reconciliation, dispatched activation has no false cancel/retry, pending stop retains confirmed ON while private rows are hidden, and ordinary-catalog navigation does not stop Radar. Query busy follows current nearby-read semantics; success-empty differs from failure. TTL/revoke/account switch remove private rows. Existing retry gates are preserved with no fictitious countdown/deadline.

README correctly marks code 3 as a typed implementation gap: preserve the actual reason in existing error types if implemented, otherwise use generic location-error copy. Four UI/style paths form the narrow implementation seam, with optional existing controller/type changes for that specific gap. Surrounding mock header, cards, navigation and map are context only. No new service, privacy mechanism or general Players redesign is proposed. No extra Owner approval gate is invented for already authorized implementation.

Exact reviewed file SHA256 values and scope limits are in [independent-review.json](independent-review.json). Source implementation, CI, DEV acceptance and Owner UAT remain **NOT_TESTED**.