# Independent bounded review — #507 private own-review addressed1

**PASS for the design/handoff, not application Source QA or UAT.** Read the actual six-file native artifact and inspected its state/command logic against the retained bounded contract capsule. Viewed actual published1280, pending390 and withdrawal-confirm390 screenshots. Operator status CAPTURED/findings[] is separate evidence. Independently exercised eight browser contract groups across390/1280 in owned sandboxed Chromium/CDP: no JavaScript errors or external requests, no horizontal overflow.

Private `/profile` collection is explicit; public venue/map remains anonymous/read-only. Latest50 coverage and missing-record uncertainty are visible. Missing exact original-game association disables edit without deriving association from venueId; closed-window/provider-unavailable examples keep withdrawal available. The editable example is clearly labelled externally supplied synthetic association, not a DTO capability. This is a real implementation dependency; the approved concept does not magically supply that association.

Pending own text and old public text remain separate. When actual public quotation is unavailable, the UI confirms visibility without substituting pending COALESCE text. Old quotation must come from a bounded actual public DTO match by returned reviewHandle. Withdrawal confirmation states loss of publication/pending changes and shows no removal before response; no14-day/provider requirement is added.

The addressed conflict lock is persistent across close: owner actions stay disabled and a card-level fresh read is available. Failed/UNKNOWN reads keep version7/lock; explicit successful synthetic response11 unlocks, closes and does not auto-submit. UNKNOWN write keeps the identical frozen packet/key, blocks abandonment/new operations, and only deliberate same-request retry completes withdrawal. The reviewer corrected an initial harness expectation that the disabled action could reopen; this is a valid stronger safety gate, not a product defect. Initial timeout evidence remains private; no artifact or threshold was changed.

README truthfully records existing missing DTO capabilities, query limits, publication delay and moderation responsibilities. Reuse existing legal/public-consent disclosure and exact server hash contract during implementation; demo wording/local timers/synthetic versions are not API evidence. No new service, backend policy rewrite, inferred Owner GO gate, native522 or design539 acceptance is introduced.

Application implementation, qualified Source QA, CI, DEV acceptance and Owner UAT remain **NOT_TESTED**. Exact reviewed hashes and implementation constraints are in [independent-review.json](independent-review.json).